Friday, 28 February 2014

Titles and Fonts


Due to us wanting our production to look like a professional thriller, we wanted the titles to connote the dark tone of the plot.  We also wanted to target our audience through our titles, so therefore the titles should look sophisticated and easy to read.  Therefore, we could not use fonts such as Comic Sans or Curlz, or any other sans serif, unprofessional fonts.  Instead, we think that using a serif font, to broadcast the seriousness and connote thriller conventions, for example Book Antiqua or Imprint MT Shadow.  In the end, we have decided to use Rockwell in bold and in CAPITALS.

For example:

ALEX HETHERINGTON
SAM DUXBURY 
 EMMA BAILEY

Wednesday, 26 February 2014

Shot List


1.       Establishing long shot of woman at desk working.  Low key lighting, her face is lit up by the computer screen. 
2.       Medium shot of the side of the girl sat at the desk.
3.       Close up on hand typing on keyboard.
4.       Shot of door, woman on left hand side as door opens and man walks through.
5.       Over the shoulder shot of woman looking up from laptop as man walks towards her.
6.       POV shot of man talking to woman from man’s prospective.
7.       POV Shot of him walking away from woman’s prospective.
8.       Medium close up of closing door.
9.       Match on action so as door closes, we see close up of door stopping an inch before it closes fully.
10.   Extreme close up of gap and man going down stairs.
11.   The medium close up shot cuts back to the woman working.
12.   Medium shot of her resuming work.
13.   As she hears a bang from the warehouse, a medium shot of her shows her turn to the door and pans as she slowly gets up and edges close to the door.
14.   As she gets closer to the door, medium shot of her looking at the crack in the door.
15.   There is a medium shot of door and girl walking through.
16.   Match on action into warehouse.
17.   We then switch to a POV shot from the edge of the warehouse from the killer’s perspective of the woman. Shot will be done using a hand held, rather than a tripod to ensure viewer knows it’s another POV.
18.   Close up of hands on balcony.
19.   Long shot of her walking down the stairs slowly.
20.   Close up of hand on banister.
21.   Reverts back to long shot of her walking down stairs.
22.   Long shot from corner behind girl as she walks down stairs and across warehouse.
23.   POV shot from killers perspective, with hand held.
24.   Medium close up of girl turning as she hears another bang.
25.   POV pan from woman’s perspective as she surveys the area.
26.   Medium long shot of woman as she surveys area.
27.   Continues previous POV pan shows van and mans’ legs.
28.   A shot from the other side of the van shows the man on the floor, and the woman looking at the shoe. We stay on the shot as she runs to the body.
29.   Zoom from medium long to close up of body as woman runs to man.
30.   Match on action long shot of her walking round van, reaching the body and bend over it.
31.   Shot from behind of woman leaning over man.
32.   POV close up of hands on body.
33.   Medium long shot of woman walking round van.
34.   Zoom to keys from long shot.
35.   Match on action of her running for keys, both long shots.
36.   Side shot of her picking up the keys.
37.   Medium long shot of her running for van and unlocking doors with keys.
38.   Medium long match on action shot of her running past dead man and opening door.
39.   Match on action of her getting into the van.
40.   Close up of the lock as she scrambles to put keys in ignition.
41.   Long shot from outside van.
42.   Medium shot of trying to start a van from outside van.
43.   Long shot from inside warehouse of her pulling out of parking space.
44.   Long shot of van driving away and out of warehouse.
45.   Black out.

SCRIPT


INT. OFFICE – NIGHT.

KAREN sat at desk. JOE walks in through door.

JOE
Right Karen, I’m off. The van keys are on the table downstairs.

KAREN
Okay, cheers, see you later.
JOE exits through door, leaves slightly ajar.
Loud bang from downstairs.
CUT IN
INT. WAREHOUSE – NIGHT.

KAREN runs to foot. Kneels to take closer look.
KAREN sees body, is visibly shocked.
Hear bang from other end of warehouse. KAREN stands quickly, turning around.
KAREN looks around, turning on the spot slowly.
Another bang. KAREN quickly turns around.

Another sound on the other side of the room. KAREN turns towards it,                        stops.  Sees van keys on counter. Runs towards keys. Another bang, quick reaction.  
Runs towards van.
KAREN
Start! Come on! Start!
CUT IN
INT. VAN – NIGHT.
KAREN gets in van, locks doors, and inserts keys.
CUT AWAY
INT. WAREHOUSE – NIGHT.
Engine starts. KAREN drives.  Doesn't turn quick enough.
Fade to black. 


END.

Monday, 24 February 2014

Props and Locations

Location

Warehouse
 A warehouse will provide an ominous atmosphere, due to the possibility of an echo, as well as the low key lighting made possible by turning the warehouse lights off. This will be used for chiaroscuro lighting,
conventional of a thriller. I will be providing this location.













Props

Van

Van is part of warehouse set, and is used by the woman to try and escape the killer. This is stored at the location I am providing.



 Van Keys


Allows the woman to enter the van, and, through the male
characters dialogue, tells the audience that the van is owned
by the company working in the warehouse.

Desk, Computer, Chair

These are typical of an office, and establish a normal,
everyday setting and a Todorovian equilibrium to be
disrupted. Again, these props are stored at the location,
so I am providing them.

Cast and Characters

The actress playing Karen will be Emma Bailey. We decided on using Emma due to her having some past experience of being behind the camera, so Emma was confident enough to play the role of the woman. We decided to use someone inside our crew because it was much  more convenient for filming and Emma fits the role of  the blonde, fulfilling the feminine stereotype we were looking to broadcast with this character.

The actor playing Joe will be Sam Chadwick.  We have chosen him because he is a good friend to the group and has some experience in front of the camera.  Also, he is tall, which will add to the masculine character, thereby juxtaposing the ‘damsel in distress’ stereotype; the woman should be killed first, not the man.  We decided to choose Sam rather than one of the two boys on our team because neither of them was experienced or confident enough to act in our production, and it was a good opportunity for Sam to be in a film.

We won’t see the villain character, except for in shadow and silhouette form, so there is no actor for this part.  This is because we think that the ambiguity of the character will make them more threatening.

Friday, 14 February 2014

The Warehouse Killer Synopsis

A number of killings have been taking place at random workplaces in the North West of England. It begins with one of these killings, where a van driver is murdered in the warehouse he works from. However, the murder does not go entirely to plan when the body is discovered by a female co-worker, who tries to drive off to escape the killer(s), but crashes and is also killed.

Can Inspector Larry, the detective who is investigating the murders, find the killer(s) and their motives, putting himself in danger in the process as he finds workplaces he thinks will be targeted next. The search takes a lot of time and is across a large area, putting strain on the detective’s home and family life. When he predicts the next target is his wife’s workplace, will he be able to stop the killer(s), and save his wife, before it’s too late?

Monday, 3 February 2014

Final Obsession from Madeleine Lewis on Vimeo.

Student Thriller Analysis - Obsession

Sam Duxbury: Conventions, Representation and Audience 
Alex Hetherington: Sound, Camera and Editing 
Emma Bailey: Titles and Themes

The Miramax production company logo starts the film, fading in and out, followed by their own production company logo for Fractional Studios, which also fades in and out. The Fractional Studios logo is black, with a black bird on it with a red eye, looking mysterious and scary. As the logo for the production company comes in, the non-diegetic music immediately starts with it. The music is eerie and sinister, immediately anchoring to the viewer the fact that it is of the thriller genre. The title screen with the name of the film then fades in, the letters in the word ‘Obsession’ flicker and when they do so, they are synchronous to the non-diegetic music in the background. The text is white against the black background, in serif, slanted font, signifying that the audience is adult. The title of the piece ‘Obsession’ is in the centre of the screen, white sans serif text on a black background, fading in and out, letter by letter. This shows a binary opposition between the two colours, thus anchoring the genre as thriller. It looks very mysterious as the letters glimmer on the screen. This titles then quickly fades into the opening establishing shot of an extreme close up of a tap dripping. Throughout the opening sequence, overlay titles fade in and out of the corner of the frame, letter by letter, starting out small and growing while they fade out, setting a mysterious mood, signifying something hidden. This keeps the audience’s attention on the main action in the frame. The titles for the names of the cast are larger than the titles for the director and music composers etc., showing the importance of the different crew members and cast in the production. All titles are displayed as white sans serif text with a black outline, except the title naming Madeleine Lewis, which is serif, with the same colour scheme. The title of the piece shows again, still white sans serif text on a black background, fading in and out and still glimmering, as we hear a crackling radio in the background, making it feel mysterious and uncomfortable.

From the production logo screen before the clip starts, the screens fade to the first shot of the extreme close up of the tap dripping. The mise-en-scene of the film again starts unconventionally, with the dripping of the tap, symbolising something normal, but broken. The diegetic sound of the water droplets hitting the sink is heard clearly, this gives a tense feel to the beginning, especially alongside the unnerving non-diegetic music which continues throughout the production. This shot creates a tense feel with just the tap dripping as it is a thriller convention as it builds interest as the viewer wants to find out where this tap is; it makes the audience wonder where they are, and who they are with. We see close ups of someone getting dressed into informal attire and having some cereal, however they do not reveal who the person is or what they look like. This sets a sinister tone, connoting that he has something to hide. This again shocks the viewer, as he is revealed to be the villain of the production, but he initially seemed like a typical person. However, some of the seemingly normal, unconventional shots have connotations of a thriller, as evidenced by the establishing shot of a dripping tap, a metaphor for life dripping away and murder, which is typical content in thrillers. The piece uses natural lighting for this. We then see a series of longs shots to set the scene, we then cut to a medium shot of someone lay in bed however their identity is hidden from us again another thriller convention of a killer/criminal used to create an ominous feel. We then have a series of close ups to follow, which show the viewer that this person seems to be a man, again another thrill convention for a criminal.

Next we cut to a series of medium shots which show his everyday morning activities. There is a close up of a mobile phone as we hear a diegetic vibrating sound coming from it, meaning that the phone is on silent, and so the character wants to be quiet and unheard. What the hoodie the villain wears is also significant, as it allows his identity to be unknown to the viewer, making him seem mysterious, which is conventional for thriller villains. The lighting changes to low key high contrast chiaroscuro lighting when he puts his shoes on, and then it goes back to natural lighting when he opens the door and goes outside.

This thriller is located in a semi-rural area, as shown by establishing shots of a typical rural scene of hills and vegetation, as well establishing shots from both the inside and outside of houses, meaning the area has been urbanised. This is not typical of a thriller, as they are most often set in urban settings like cities, but there are still many thrillers that use rural locations as these remote areas allow for more crimes and violent acts to be committed, where victims are far from help and witnesses, making them very vulnerable in the eyes of the viewer. This sets an edgy, scary mood, especially with the shots of him with the binoculars, connoting spying and stalking. The other shots before this have made him seem normal and his tasks have been ‘everyday’ menial tasks, but these few shots make him seem somewhat sinister. Whilst the rural area could appear to be hospitable, this production has been filmed near winter, when the trees have no leaves, which makes the setting seem somewhat harsh and unwelcoming. As the mystery man is walking down the road, we can hear the diegetic sounds of cars, setting the scene. A series of ellipsis edits show the man walking down the road until we see him stalking a woman, who seems to be the 'damsel in distress' character as she fits the convention criteria. As the man travels through the forest, we can hear what seems to be the diegetic sound of birds, however, the sound seems enhanced as if it may have been added post filming, connoting nature and the normal life of the victim. As the woman is walking and the man is following her, we can hear the diegetic sounds of their footsteps.

When the next scene comes in, it is night time and we hear, as the man is still following the woman, we hear their feet cracking branches as they walk, this again links to anchoring the thriller genre. From this point, the non-diegetic music keeps its eerie feel, however we also hear a piano add to the music, this creates an even more ominous feel to the scene, letting the viewer know that something is about to happen. The urban aspects of the location shown by the mise-en-scene add to this unwelcoming theme, as dirty buildings and corrugated metal fencing is shown is the background of shots featuring the characters, indicating that the girl may be in danger even if the viewer does not initially see she is being stalked. An unwelcoming, threatening location is typical in thrillers, and the mise-en-scene conveys this. We then cut to a long shot of her dropping her bag, then we have a medium shot of her rising and the man stood a few meters behind her however when she stands fully, it blocks the audiences view of the man, again creating mystery, however the medium shot shows the viewer her reaction as she realises someone may be behind her. We then see a match on action of her turning around however the man is gone, again reinforcing this idea of mystery for the viewer.

There is an ellipsis edit to the night, a conventional time of day for a thriller, of an out of focus shot, again creating mystery. The shot then cuts to a long shot of her walking on the road. Then we cut to a long shot of her walking towards the camera and then a parallel edit of a medium shot of the mystery man presumably following her, although this is not clear, somewhere else. Later we cut to a close up of a bridge rail, which, using selective focus just on the rail shows two silhouettes, presumably the man following the woman, in the background, again creating more mystery of what will happen. We then cut to a long shot of the girl turning around, and then the legs of the man stepping in front of the camera blocking our view again keeping the identity of the mystery man unknown to the viewer however we now know that the girl knows this identity. This is clever framing here as we see her through his legs, connoting that she is trapped. When the inevitable attack on the girl happens, there is a close up of her mouth as she screams. As the female character screams the frame darkens, almost fading to black, so we can only see the outline of her mouth and eyes, creating mystery as the viewer wants to know what happens next. Again like the birds in the forest, the sound seems enhanced to ensure it is heard and it has an impact on the viewer. The assumed murder at the end of the opening occurs on a motorway overpass, showing the rural urban setting, where there would be few witnesses, whilst still fitting the typical urban backdrop of thrillers. The screen then goes blank and the title page of the clip comes in again, however the sound of the girl screaming continues for a brief period during this time; this acts as a sound bridge to the title page and ensures a smooth transition between them. Finally, when the music begins to fade, as with the first title page, the letters in the word ‘Obsession’ flicker, and as they do so, we hear the non-diegetic sound of a flickering radio broadcast. This sound is, like the first, synchronous to the flickering of the ‘Obsession’ title, linking clearly back to the opening shots.

We have identified several themes in this student piece, the first being the title of the actual piece: ‘obsession’, as this man is obviously following this girl persistently, stalking her until he can do whatever causes her to scream. Another theme is ‘innocence’, as the girl does not seem to have done anything wrong, or anything to provoke this man into stalking her. This adds to another theme we have identified: ‘suspicion’, because as an audience there is no evidence that this girl has any connection with the man, except that he waits until it is dark until he approaches her. This is scary for the audience as the film rolls on and he keeps following her. Finally, we recognise this ‘enigma’, because as an audience we do not know what happens to the girl after the titles, and we do not know what has triggered him stalking her and possibly attacking her. ‘Obsession’ follows many conventions that allow the viewer to identify the film as a thriller. One of these is the chiaroscuro lighting which occurs at night, when the main incident, which the viewer assumes is a murder or other violent act, takes place. This lighting only occurs after a majority of the opening was high key, which is somewhat unconventional for a thriller. This lighting change indicates a passage of time between shots, as well as perhaps shocking the viewer, because the high key lighting might cause them to believe no exciting incidents will happen, despite knowing that the girl is being stalked, and the change to chiaroscuro lighting may make them expect the stalker to do something to the girl, which then occurs in the attack and assumed murder.

The main character shown in this opening is that of a typical Proppian villain, who stalks and, the viewer assumes, murders a girl, who is a typical damsel in distress, but is apparently not a main character, as she is killed or kidnapped within the opening. The opening shots of the villains seemingly normal life not only ensure the viewer is surprised when he is revealed to be a villain, they also feature a life which is probably similar to the life of the as yet unknown hero, whose normal life will most likely be disrupted by the villain’s actions. Similarities between heroes and villains are common in thrillers, as they make the conflict between them more difficult for the hero, as opposed to a villain who is obviously beneath him. Also, the actions of a villain; disrupting the hero’s normal life, conforms to Todorov’s narrative theory of an equilibrium, disruption and eventual return to a new equilibrium. The disruption the villain causes will either be the murder he committed in the opening, or this murder will be first in a series of murders that eventually affects the hero. Of course, to solve these enigmas we would have to watch the rest or more of the film.

The audience this thriller is aimed at is most likely fairly young, due to the sans serif font in the overlay titles, and the young dress codes of the characters. However, there is a sense of mystery as to the killer’s identity and no over the top action, so the audience will have to be fairly mature and invested in the film as well.

The thriller opening is available to view as I have embedded it to my blog.